[@Temperance] Looks mostly good! In age, though, we're looking for her actual age as well. It's important because a younger vampire will be weaker than an older (though of course, Ferals are strong for their age).  And if you feel the picture does Katarina justice, a written appearance isn't necessary. You're free to add one either way, though. 

Other than all that, she looks good. Fix up the age and you can throw her into the Character Tab.