[quote=@twannyman] Supplies Crop seeds of different plants(Watermelon, Banana, Orange, Apple, Carrot, Wheat and Tomato) (1000 of each) [b]Mass Machinery Terraformers (5)[/b] Healthcare pods( 10) [/quote] How does that work? The terraformers? How do they create land from sea? Antigravity isn't a thing, so I am very curious to see your well thought-out scientific explanation. The healthcare pods also strike me as hard to believe. Is it a magic cure-all machine? [quote=@twannyman] Strategical Plan The first thing what [b]i[/b] would do is [b]anylizing[/b] [b]Use consistent verb tense[/b] the plant spieces and bacteria. At the same time [b]i[/b] would use my Terraformers to make more landmass instead of water. In the meanwhile I would stabilize the food and water supply. I would be making a camp with the entertainment pods, healthcare pods and food/water supply. [b][i]Missing Subject[/i][/b] Using electronic fenches to defend this. In addition [b]i[/b] would use the laser defense drones at the [b]G[/b]ates and corners. [/quote] I. This should not be in first person. II. Fix the spelling and grammar errors. III. This should really be longer. IV. Something about it makes me feel like it isn't a governmental directive so much as some utopian wilderness survival notes. These are my initial thoughts. Obviously it is under construction, so I do not expect perfection, but please fix these errors.