[quote=@MelonHead] Want to give us a quick run-down of the alternate names? Or is it first person to play one gets to name it? [/quote] Ones I've used can fill in gaps as needed, but player creation is favoured. I'd like everyone to feel they own a piece of the RP instead of just taking a passenger seat! [@Lutalica] & [@Lutalica] I'll be heading into my office soon, so I'll grab a quick cup of coffee then leave my thoughts for the CS's here along those for [@Chanda]. Welcome guys! :sun [b]Edit To Original Post[/b] Added religion and magic info for Vrent, again this is specific to our narrow setting. Added the Ventus and Ulla, two races whom along with humans are most seen in Vrent. Any player info/races can also be added here. :) I think I'll refrain from adding much more to the OP. I don't want info overload before we even begin! :sun [b][color=gold]Character Feedback ~[/color][/b] First off some general thoughts on all three. All are accepted with flying colours, though I will need some kind of basic backstory for Brevana, though I am sure it is on the way! These characters turned out perfectly for where I wanted to go with this. A hodgepodge group, and they all have something about them which will really mesh with some of the plot twists I have in mind. On that note, I do have a very specific route I'd like this to go. I do have a 'big twist' that I would love to see come to fruition. As such I will be pushing us along at a nice pace for this and can't wait to see how these character's develop. I'll be doing out my own CS shortly. [b]Oliver[/b] Straight up love where this character went. Initially I was like "oh, an old school knight, that's pretty cool I guess." Of course, his actual background and the way he's human to a fault is great. Much more likeable and interesting character than I thought it at first would be and what's any expedition without a thief! :lol [b]Hector[/b] Great addition also! I'd love if you'd like to write a quick little blurb on Herwen that we can include in the OP, with you credited of course. I would say though, Herwen you said is 'across' from Vrent. I'm going to assume you meant across and ocean/body of water as geographically, a desert right next to fertile valleys and mountains isn't realistic in the distances involved! I really enjoyed the tribe's interpretation of magic users being deemed to weak to survive without magic. It's a different but logical viewpoint. I will say however, that matter-crafting unlimited arrows would be extremely time extensive and physically exhausting within the bounds of magic in this world. It's completely fine, just be aware it wouldn't be a throw-away task. The character immediately adds diversity to the mix! [b]Brevana[/b] Very cool character to have in the RP. A heretical monk in Vrent. Always good to have an older, world-wise character in the mix also. I'd love to see more information on her order and homeland and reasons for hatred of Yvazgrul if it's something you'd like to expand on now. Of course if you'd rather leave that exposition until the IC, that's great too!