I have a quick suggestion to the GM, maybe just don't roleplay in first person. And I agree with Simple on the grammar errors. If you want to have a roleplay that looks decent and fun to join you should have a CS, rules, and background on what the RP is about. Even if you can't play the games you should do some basic research on the game so you know what the heck you are doing or else the roleplay ends up somewhere in what I consider "RP Dead Zone" which happens due to lack of interest or lack of proper grammar and punctuation. There is such thing as spell check, I think it's readily available on all electronic devices, I suggest using that to correct any grammatical errors.

Just my two cents. ;)