THERE YOU GO. [hider=Uchiha Saketsui] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/J2xJTWj.jpg[/img] [i]"Do what can be done. Leave the rest to destiny and other bullshit.”[/i] [b]Saketsui is not buff, although he is impeccably lean. He underwent physical practice to a point where his body grew comfortably thin, blessed with strength that came to him only after training. He is strenuous in his attire, although his looks appear meager and slight. He is a possessor of swarthy, black hair and ever-looking eyes. His lips are cherry red and his ears are pointy, with an olive sort of complexion about him, tanned in yellow and white. He is significantly more dark than his kin, though, attributed solely to his foreign mother. He is 5'9 in height, much shorter than his facial expression implies[ one of an adult ] and he only weighs 112 lbs. His limbs are all tall, however, which comes to great supplement to his exiguous stature. Although evermore a short man, Saketsui still wields the kind of threatening look that brings fear. Sharp, dingy eyes will look forth now and forever. [/b][/center] [u][b]Personnel files.[/b][/u] [i]Access only by security personnel with a C3 clearance.[/i] [indent]【[U]Full Name[/U]】 [I]Uchiha Saketsui[/I] 【[U]Alias[/U]】 [i][ ][/i] 【[U]Affiliation[/U]】 [i]The Red Sages[/i] 【[U]Age[/U]】 [i]Eighteen[/i] 【[U]Sex[/U]】 [i]Male[/i] 【[U]Sexuality[/U]】 [i]Straight[/i] 【[U]Birthplace[/U]】 [i]Konohagakure[/i] 【[U]Bloodline[/U]】 [i]Uchiha[/i] 【[U]Rank[/U]】 [i]Chūnin[/i][/indent] [u][b]Psych. report.[/b][/u] [i]Medical secrecy applies.[/i] [indent]【[U]Personality[/U]】 [i]Saketsui has a bit of an atmosphere to him, although it is nothing to fear. Primarily, he enjoys remaining calm and steady, with ever-present focus all around. He is not swimming in depths of darkness or such, but with a sort of demeanor that spells out exotic, Saketsui is accepting of those around him but rejected when it comes to then actually acknowledging him, which is very understandable in more terms than just one. While he may be a part of socialization, it is not necessarily a part of him. Aside from this, Saketsui is an honorable man, who lives with a sense of personal justice that makes him extremely righteous and infrequently considerate. In personal measure, Saketsui is generally a quiet man. He does not enjoy speaking when it's useless, although that does not define him a dark and unapproachable man. In fact, Saketsui is prominently social, despite liking to keep to himself when he needs a bit of alone time, just like every other person does. While he is unable to reach out to conversation, he'll take it on when it comes in front of him. Saketsui is not all threatening and sad, however, as he is extremely fond of staying in touch with respectful ones, and always keeping to his words. That is why he is a considerable Uchiha, not only in strength but in prestige, as he finds solace in pride and ego towards his clan, all of it's men, and his family. In his case, he is not an active achiever of friends, but the scant amount that he has is all he's ever needed. That's why Saketsui finds ease in socialization and concentration, both of which are aspects necessary to interact with not only the aforementioned pupil, but higher-ups as well. Additionally, Saketsui has great appreciation towards combat, even though he finds it rather disruptive and deterrent, combat has to happen and with his recent participation with the activities of the Red Sages, Saketsui promised to fight until the day his life flashes before his eyes. That's why he's taken certain habits during combat to improve his experience, like serenity of mind, preceding meditation if possible, addressing the opponent, and many more that will retain his focus and make sure he's not too redundant to divert from battle ahead and stay to his usual sense of protection and being the 'underdog', something that's always been his downfall. Taught to shield those thoughts that loved ones come first, he's long since discarded that mindset and replaced it with something a bit more intermittent. Adrenaline rush. To keep himself going even when he's tired, beaten and driven to the edge of life. Aside from this, Saketsui wields the Sharingan as if it is a part of him. He's forgotten about all of the family history that implies the Sharingan's previous malice, and uses it as a blessing. A godsend gift. He is able to comprehend that usage of the Sharingan should only come after severe disorientation to himself or others that require him to pull it out. With Saketsui, it is not only a power-up, but a trump card, which is why he's more into his own strength and power. Self-esteem was first to possess his eyes, much before the Sharingan came about to replace it. Or only add to it.[/i] 【[U]History[/U]】 [i]Saketsui's story is not as simplistic as it can be. First, his birth. There was a lot wrong with it. His mother was a Kirigakure province shinobi, someone averagely sophisticated and more gentle than the skies themselves. She may have possessed a heart of gold, but she wasn't too keen on leaving his father, and had to change for HIS sake. Saketsui's grandfather from his dad's side was a martyr, so naturally his son came out to be a staid, solemn man. He was quiet, not a man to tell a lot over the dinner table. That's why Saketsui did not have the most valuable childhood. His mom treated him just as well and as bad as any other mom who expects prestige from her son, solely because she wanted the best for him. His household was meticulously peaceful, but sporadic missions overturned the more amicable frequency of the house and Saketsui had the endure the sight of his father leave. Go. The Hamajo Confederation had him at work consistently, although he came about time after time to greet his son and wife, both of which he showed sincere appreciation towards. But, Saketsui had no gratitude towards his father, his mother or the Confederation itself. But that was not enough to swell a sense of declination in the young Uchiha. It was uncharted to him the fact that he was born with that surname. They'd called him by his first name for the first years of his life. His memory is boggy. Information is kept in dire secrecy. At the youngest age, a sole son that was hailed a gift, Saketsui never enjoyed the company of siblings, and that is why he had to battle alone. Fight in solitude. Isolation threatened his peace. His mind. He had no meditation, he was too weak. Too fragile. Too vulnerable. That's why Saketsui had a severe case of personal depression. It came like a storm. He kept to himself at all times, shared his own secrets and darkly addressed his own problems. Circumstances did not allow him to have too many friends, because introductions could not be appropriately made, and Saketsui had the sort of personality you were forced to get used to for potent enjoyment. That is why, growing up, Saketsui hated what was known as the Shinobi world. The Hamajo Confederation. He hated his -parents- more than anything, and at his earnest, he absolutely loathed anyone that exposed him to this life. This earth. But despite this, Saketsui was still persistent when it came to education. He'd joined the academy in hopes of becoming a Shinobi. He was not overwhelmingly strong, as he hadn't been undergoing practice since his childhood. He was but a mild part of the academy, and those much better than him received respect and rewards. Achievements. Whilst he sat back and watched, riddled in anger and agitation. But that brewed more and more as days, weeks, months, even YEARS went by. Following his graduation and his official becoming of a Genin, Saketsui received his first gift from his father. The [ truth ]. The Hamajo Confederation sent his dad on a mission that was not too strategical. Partaking in it was a small squad of six that had been ambushed and assassinated in the midst of the forest. Their travels were cut short and Saketsui's father was unfortunately put down into his deathbed. With a lack of inexperience, Saketsui was unsure as to what he could potentially do now. Before his father's death, he shared something with Saketsui that made him recoil. His response was unruly, well-deserved of what cruelty they did to him. He fell to his knees. Tears fell that day. Tears transparent through them red eyes. Shining very bright. A swirl that spun about. "You are a part of us. Our pride, Saketsui. The Uchiha." He did not know. He didn't want to know. All he did following that was walk out, but he vowed to keep his pleasure in tact. To stay alive. Strong. To keep himself on constant comfort. He didn't want to suffer for so long. Solitude was banished. He sought the outside, he wanted to make a pleasurable change. His early life as a Shinobi changed too quickly, and he rose in strength at a much faster pace than he did previously. Slowly, it'd transformed him into a respectable Genin of the Hamajo Confederation. But he realized something along his journey, that the Confederation was the populace that completely wronged him, his family, and his father. So when he hit the proper age, Saketsui decided to abandon his mother and seek out more. Strength and pleasure. And to right what is wrong. What was untrue. He left. He turned his back to the world and sought a better kind of peace. He sought that in [ them. ] The Red Sages. [/i] 【[U]Family ties[/U]】 [i]Saketsui has minimal family ties with both parents, as he’s been treated with relative simplicity by his mother and father, both of which expressed no gratitude towards any of their son’s prior achievements. They deserve no significant mention, except for the fact that his mother managed to contribute to his upbringing much more than he’d ever admit. His father, on the other hand, had no effect in being raised, attributing towards him no more than a gain of strength Saketsui admittedly does not like anymore than he did his own parents. With minimal guidance at hand, Saketsui had of course strayed far from the ‘family bonds’ circuit, so much that he let loose his Uchiha Pride and left the village, seeking refugee in whatever else can he call family. [/i] 【[U]Dreams and fears[/U]】 [i]Saketsui does not have any actual dreams, beyond the redundant desire of power and strength, which honestly everyone seeks in their own way. Saketsui is able to express this want with staggering accuracy, thus making it seem as though it’s his real purpose. Supposedly, Saketsui is far more simple than to be wooed by strength alone, and seeks a mystery that he himself has not figured out yet. The fact that he dared journey away from the Hamajo Confederation and the Konohagakure province shows that he’s willing to discover.[/i][/indent] [u][b]Combat reports.[/b][/u] [i]Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.[/i] 【[U]Fighting style[/U]】 [i]Shortly would normally indicate that Saketsui possesses no solid fighting style, and saying so would be wrong. Saketsui fighting is identifiable in that it is more reliant on a prominent combination of dual-wielding swords and different forms of ninjutsu applicable in less elaborate but far more innovative ways. A creative fighter on the go, Saketsui is strategic enough to go through battle with little to no losses on his part, with singular maintenance on his own health and keeping himself safe, this implies that Saketsui is a shift fighter, someone able to change from defensive to offensive in a few seconds. Tactic after another with proper follow up then allows him to – while parrying strikes at a pace he sees fit – counterattack and efficiently keep up with his enemy. His own Kekkei Genkai helps him much more with this style. [/i] 【[U]Kekkei genkai, or bloodline limit[/U]】 [b][u]Bloodline limit name:[/u][/b] [i]Sharingan[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]The Sharingan is a part of the trio of unblemished Dojutsu that either haunt or bless Konohagakure. The Sharingan itself is the color of the flames, the ‘Eye of the Heart’, as told by those who have known it. Red in it’s color, it possesses a wondrous hue that engulfs the eye fully. In Saketsui’s case, three tomoe’s swirl about and manifest inside his eye, one that has three and the other has two, instead. [/i] [b][u]Strengths:[/u][/b] [i] The Sharingan grants the wielder two broad abilities: the "Eye of Insight" (洞察眼, Dōsatsugan) and the "Eye of Hypnotism" (催眠眼, Saimingan).[13] Although the abilities are not literally restricted to certain eyes, Even within these two categories, there may exist several distinct though similar abilities: The Eye of Insight gives color to chakra, allowing it to be fully identifiable during combat and even outside of it. It also gives clarity to perception, paying further heed to each and every detail in movement, any physical action that takes place is reflexively absorbed by the Sharingan and given to the wielder’s head, through which they are able to see through their motion. The Sharingan, as though it is precognition, when advanced to a certain point that it allows Saketsui to read actions and act against them when needed. The Eye of Hypnotism, on the other hand, allows usage of the Genjutsu: Sharingan, a technique exclusive to this Kekkei Genkai. This Genjutsu is applicable to any target of any strength so long as they sustain eyesight with him, and the Genjutsu allows him to control the person by literal means. [/i] [b][u]Weaknesses:[/u][/b] [i]The well known weakness of the Sharingan is that it is easily countered, because people prior to the rebirth of the Uchiha Clan have witnessed it in use so many times, that it became a worldwide popular aspect of the Shinobi world. The Sharingan is thus easy to see through and work against.[/i] 【[U]Ninja techniques[/U]】 [u]A rank techniques:[/u] [u]B rank techniques:[/u] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Flying_Swallow]Flying Swallow[/url][/i] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Ash_Pile_Burning]Katon: Haisekisho[/url][/i] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Shadow_Clone_Technique]Kage Bunshin no Jutsu[/url][/i] [u]C rank techniques:[/u] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Fire_Release:_Great_Fireball_Technique]Katon: Goukakyu no Jutsu[/url][/i] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Summoning_Technique]Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Hawk[/url][/i] [u]D-E rank techniques:[/u] [i]All Academy Jutsu[/i] 【[U]Custom made techniques[/U]】 [b][u]Jutsu name:[/u][/b] [i] Shinobiyoru Ken no Gishiki [ lit. Ceremony of the Creeping Sword ][/i] [b][u]Rank:[/u][/b] [i]C[/i] [b][u]Range:[/u][/b] [i]Short, melee range.[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]The Ceremony of the Creeping Sword is a technique where accuracy and detail is implied. The Taijutsu is more of a form than an actual attack, whereas Iaido is an ability that Samurai utilized to achieve swift beheading, the Ceremony of the Creeping Sword is slow, calculated and articulate. Where depth is applicable, he puts strain. First and foremost, the technique is initiated similar to the aforementioned one, where Saketsui places both hands on opposite hilts – left to right and right to left – and draw the swords in a cross. With speed and precision, the distance is broken between Saketsui and his enemy and one sword comes down in a quick, unrelenting brandish. But the Ceremony of the Creeping Sword owes it’s name to the proper usage of what follows. If the initial strike is by luck evaded, then the other sword, as though a shadow of the one before, comes about. By coordinating a proper distraction with the first slash that comes as a feint more than anything, the other sword is without distraction able to disappear and reappear, something akin to Ninjutsu but far more complicated. Focus is drawn –away- from the second sword by putting all of his strength on the first one, and then the second strike is able to rip down unseen, making it extremely difficult to avoid. With the addition of the Sharingan that pays significant heed to any movement the enemy makes, this technique is far more effective. The one weakness that the Ceremony of the Creeping Sword has is that, once an opponent has witnessed it, the technique can NEVER work on that same target again, because their eyesight and memory have already absorbed the technique’s speed and accuracy, and it is rendered useless if the other blade goes noticed by a single tick. The other disadvantage is that any wielder of the Sharingan is capable of seeing the other blade, assuming that it is activated at the time. [/i] 【[U]Custom made techniques[/U]】 [b][u]Jutsu name:[/u][/b] [i] Hissatsu: Henge no Jutsu[/i] [b][u]Rank:[/u][/b] [i]C[/i] [b][u]Range:[/u][/b] [i]Self[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]While the Henge no Jutsu is a widely known technique with Shinobi that graduate from the academy, Saketsui is able to employ a more diverse form of the technique. After utilizing the Kage Bunshin no Jutsu, Saketsui can then either transform himself into a sword or transform one of his bunshin into a sword [ though he prefers the latter ]. The sword that manifests has no sharpness whatsoever, but can be combined with Samurai Sabre Technique to gain an extra sting to it, because both him and the clone are able to knead chakra and thus the effect is essentially made much stronger. However, as Saketsui is only proficient at dual-wielding, he is forced to use this technique in tandem with Kage Bunshin no Jutsu and Samurai Sabre Technique, which will have a huge toll on his chakra reserves in the long run.[/i] 【[U]Custom made techniques[/U]】 [b][u]Jutsu name:[/u][/b] [i] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Dance_of_the_Crescent_Moon]Dance of the Full Moon[/url][/i] [/i] [b][u]Rank:[/u][/b] [i]A[/i] [b][u]Range:[/u][/b] [i]Short, melee range.[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]Dance of the Full Moon is a direct variation to the Dance of the Crescent Moon, which is a series of strikes that come from several directions that aim to deter an enemies’ line of evasion. First, a handseal is performed and both swords are individually pulled. With respect to his own speed, Saketsui then brings three, not two, Kage Bunshins, one from up and two from the east and west. Then, they close in on their enemy. Honing in with potent precision, each clone then creates a cross and beckons chakra to cover their swords, after which they strike in tandem at a singular opponent. This technique is supremely efficient because, while it may be arbitrary that an enemy does not avoid it, the technique itself can repeat itself constantly until the opponent is actually hit. Despite the fact that this technique can go on for long, the Kage Bunshin cannot be maintained for longer than a few minutes, which then renders this ability unusable for a good while. That, coupled with the dire need to sustain his own chakra, brings about a huge disadvantage to the technique that cannot be overlooked.[/i] 【[U]Weaponry, tools and objects.[/U]】 [b][u]Weapon, tool or object name:[/u][/b] [i] Mūn setsudan ken[/i] [b][u]Weapon, tool or object type:[/u][/b] [i]Sword / Katana.[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]The Mun Setsudan Ken is one of the two swords Saketsui is fond of putting to use. The sword itself hs a dark-colored handle and a matching scabbard. The blade is extremely sharp and durable, able to withstand great punishment before actually breaking a part.[/i] [b][u]Weapon, tool or object name:[/u][/b] [i] Hangetsu-kiri ken[/i] [b][u]Weapon, tool or object type:[/u][/b] [i]Sword / Katana.[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]Respective to the previous sword, the Hangetsu-kiri ken is far more sharper and dangerously long, with a white hilt and a black scabbard, owing this kind of opposite coloring to the fact that it’s named the Half-Moon Cutting Sword. This one is essentially the same as the Mun Setsudan Ken, although it is far more recipient of chakra in general and crafted in such a way that it’ll accept his chakra better than any other sword could. The Hangetsu-kiri Ken is also the sword any bunshin will transform to if the Hissatsu: Henge no Jutsu is used, as by default it is Saketsui’s primary choice. [/i][/hider] Edit: So, the things I changed. 1) The appearance thing. Bad contradiction on my part, sorry about that. 2) The double negatives. Shit man that was like a fifth grader mistake. 3) I didn't change anything about it because I think maybe I didn't convey it properly but the truth was basically his father telling him that he is an Uchiha before he died and after Saketsui got Sharingan. Yeah, uh, I think I mentioned he didn't know about that for a good while. I THINK. Four) Uh, I changed Samurai Sabre Technique to Flying Swallow. I'm not sure if this is more plausible but I'm going to stand here hoping for the best. 5) I didn't remove his Hissatsu: Henge no Jutsu bcuz it's cool 2 me bcuz no one likes henge anymore and i like being mr. special snowflake Six) I can't actually redo his History right now, because it's 5 am. If you think it's bad enough not to deserve approval, that's fine, I'll get to remaking it later on when I'm not half-dead. I appreciate the feedback though. And yeah, Movie style is the only style I got. I haven't been RPing for too long. 7) i tried to make him as naruto as i possibly could but i ended up making sauceke rip 8) there's no more but i like the number 8 so yeah. But that's all I could manage for now. Small changes, I know, but I mean, it's what my brain can work out right now.