Sort of the idea. The puppeteer is a puppet. Besides, you said this was a Slice of Life and Combat RP, so, I decided to actually have some Slice of Family life. [color=39b54a]I guess it is typical of a whimsical life to have an atrocious cat person eat your face.[/color] ~Will nix the Mind Body Jutsu. I figured 200+ years was enough for stuff to spread around, but no prob. [color=39b54a]You figured wrong.[/color] ~The Dustless Bewildering Cover, never seen it used. I know its in the anime, I know who Mu is, but never actually watched that part. The way I understood it, it was his mastery of the Technique which made him so op. Haiyu of course has no such mastery, but I'd like to imagine its a more basic form of the A rank jutsu. My understanding of it seems to be the same as your compromise; that it was an effective hide from dojutsu. So, win win? [color=39b54a]As long as it trolls the Uchiha and Hyuuga, I'm good.[/color] ~Eh, the needleshot is just that: no poison, just "I don't have any puppets? NEEDLES!" [color=39b54a]Wiki said poison. No loose cannons.[/color] ~The fire-release seals were my reasoning to try and give my Chunin level character a wrist mounted flamethrower~ Can I haz pretty pleaz? [color=39b54a]If it's like Sasori's sure w/e, just don't shape it in various BS ways.[/color] ~The bite is the only poison he has on him... maybe a paralyzing or sluggish poison? Effects are like any of the Sound-Nin's mind effecting stuff? [color=39b54a]Sure, DEFINE it in your CS. Poison effects are often useful. But instant death ones are gay as fuck.[/color] ~Mamushi DOES need chakra threads. Still a puppet, but as chunin and only one puppet, he needs only the five fingers. Fortunately, those are from the hand its coiled on, and they kind of go in reverse. Different finger positions and combinations trigger different effects. The middle finger raised high to the sky shoots a banner that says "Fuck Yoooooooouuuuuu!"[color=39b54a]Ok Gud[/color] Issue with all puppets is that when they're broke, they're broke, they have limited number of tricks, the joints are weak, and the users are meh at close combat. [color=39b54a]Issue with jutsu is that they eat chakra and are often one trick ponies with smurt people. Yeah, they count as jutsu in a way.[/color] Right, all kidding aside, I'll get to the changes tomorrow. Haiyu was honestly not intended to be the annoying Uchiha 2.0, but moreso someone whose just... tired and desperate. Had to grow up quicker than he would of liked, and doesn't have the same mental luxury as some people. He doesn't fight for a cause, doesn't believe in other side, and is pretty much the poor bastard literally stuck between the Red Sages and the Confederation. Any advice for conveying more of that than a delicious dish from France? [color=39b54a]The Sasuke sauce joke is mostly a jab at whatever looks like Sasuke. Often calm, quiet and collected individuals with questionable social skills. It's gotten so common here that Barbecue Sauce-ke became a meme I unfortunately created. The character is fine. Also no, I will not share delicious French dishes to you filthy peasants.[/color] Also, I'll probably flesh his history more. [color=39b54a]k[/color]