[@chapatrap] your sheet is okay, but it feels somewhat bland and disjointed. Why not focus it a bit? Instead of having isolated knights who are xenophobic and occasionally raid others, why not make a force of religious-fanatic raiders, a scourge of the civilized races, who wreak vengeance upon the riverlanders (or whomever) for the martyrdom of their ancient hero, and have castles filled with loot from more civilized lands? That's just a suggestion, but I would like to see something more focused and with greater story potential.