[quote=@Milkman]
I find the lack of activity in this RP disturbing :(
[/quote]

Hi Milkman

Reviewed your application. 

A few notes:

1) the Elvea. Clearly elves by a (barely) different name. Since we're trying to get away from the D&D races, lets nix these dudes or give them an interesting spin and a new name.

2) the Anthro-Fennecians. Firstly, the name is a bit cumbersome and unnatural. lets go with Fennecians? Second, the race itself is a bit cutesy/JRPGish/Narnian for the setting. Lets maybe try to make them seem more at home in a world full of horrible tentacle elves and roving mutants, etc? No furry fox tails. Please.

3) Confederation of the 8 great democratic Anthro-Fennecian City States. same thing with the name here, a bit cumberson and unnatural. The Fennecian Confederacy or the Democratic League or something would have a more organic ring to it.

In general, I like the level of detail and appreciate your enthusiasm for this RP [s]which is ALIVE! POST![/s] Ahem. But I think you need to grimdark your faction and race up a few notches and make it aesthetically at home with some of the other factions. More [url=http://orig04.deviantart.net/c9b7/f/2012/116/4/e/classic_mythology__anubis_by_meluran-d4xnvc0.jpg]this[/url], less [url=http://rs797.pbsrc.com/albums/yy259/lucava/animals/fox_by_kikariz-d31ndwu.png~c200]this[/url]. Sound good?