So I made my first arena character, this is the first step I've done so far, I'm interested in starting Arena matches so if you adepts and experts could let me know how it looks that'd be great

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Name: Shyael Lymeria
Age: 106
Race: Sky Elf
Gender: Female
Occupation: Ranger
Pseudonyms/nicknames: Shy, Shya


History: Shyael grew up in a small village way up in the mountains, the village consisted of large watch towers and small huts built into the mountain side, the rest of the village, the shop and the inn were beneath the mountains exterior, large caves wound inside the rock and stone. The huts were made out of stone and were rounded so they didn't stand out on the mountains surface.

Shyael as she became of age was assigned as a guard where she excelled and soon became guard captain, her excellence was noticed by a veteran ranger and he soon took her as an apprentice, she spent the next ten years diligently training and becoming adept with her crossbow, sword and her unarmed combat.

-Equipment-
Weapon(s): Sword
Crossbow
Armor: Light armor (check appearance)
Items: bolts.

-Skills-
Shyael is extremely fast, both through the air and on the ground, she's well adept with her crossbow and is just as good with her sword.

-Flaws-
Shyael relies heavily on her wings for speed and movement, opting to fly rather than run.

Hmm, honestly, not quite.

I'm more picky than most, but for example when you say 'light armour' and 'check appearance' those things don't actually mean anything in a fighting setting. What is the armour made of? It could be iron, leather, steel or even magical elf metal. If you make up armour give a rough estimation of its strength, can it turn a blade or an arrow? Could it stop a gunshot? Not that it really matters if you're taking the armour as it looks in the picture, as it would be nearly completely useless.

What type of sword? There are quite a few.

What type of crossbow? Or rather (as it's probably fantasy) how quickly can it be reloaded and what's its stopping power?

Some people are OK with vague skillsets, but it's usually better to iterate something more specific. Also, anything you don't mention is usually considered human standard. Is she as strong as a human female of roughly the same build? How quick is very quick? How quick does she fly?

These are the sort of questions you need to ask yourself. I'll post two links to CS deposits in a second that you can check out to get some ideas on detail. Provided you're interested in being detailed that is, I'm sure some people will accept more general sheets.

http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/79678-rpguild-ranking-headquarters/char
http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/79934-people-trapped-in-a-giant-melon/ooc