Hmm, honestly, not quite. I'm more picky than most, but for example when you say 'light armour' and 'check appearance' those things don't actually mean anything in a fighting setting. What is the armour made of? It could be iron, leather, steel or even magical elf metal. If you make up armour give a rough estimation of its strength, can it turn a blade or an arrow? Could it stop a gunshot? Not that it really matters if you're taking the armour as it looks in the picture, as it would be nearly completely useless. What type of sword? There are quite a few. What type of crossbow? Or rather (as it's probably fantasy) how quickly can it be reloaded and what's its stopping power? Some people are OK with vague skillsets, but it's usually better to iterate something more specific. Also, anything you don't mention is usually considered human standard. Is she as strong as a human female of roughly the same build? How quick is very quick? How quick does she fly? These are the sort of questions you need to ask yourself. I'll post two links to CS deposits in a second that you can check out to get some ideas on detail. Provided you're interested in being detailed that is, I'm sure some people will accept more general sheets. [url]http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/79678-rpguild-ranking-headquarters/char[/url] [url]http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/79934-people-trapped-in-a-giant-melon/ooc[/url]