[quote=@Blue Demon]
[@TK421]Alrighty. Issues first.
1) The picture doesn't work. Either fix it or get rid of it.
2) Does Payton actually go to school at the moment or is he just working to save for college? You were slightly vague about that.
But other than that you're good to go.

Obviously you have something [i]hinky[/i] in Peyton's background. If you don't want anyone to know, you can PM me the addition information. What I'd like to know about is:
A) The Father's death
B) The mother's disappearance
C) The symbols on the jacket.
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1) I'll just remove the pic

2) Peyton's intention is to go to school. So he's working full time at [i]Trade Winds[/i] and trying to go full-time at the college.

A) I was inspired by FateWeaver's (a la [i]Fool Moon[/i]) character background, and thought that perhaps Peyton's father was killed by a lycanthrope. Which variety of were-type is up to you. His father incidentally was a Park Ranger in Yellowstone.

B) Gaining more inspiration from a Dresden novel, I thought that Peyton's mother could either be a sorceress on the run, or a member of either the Red (or Fellowship of Saint Giles [depending on the chronology of the game]) or White Vampire court. Again, I am willing to give you creative liberty on which one.

C) The symbols must be something archaic -- if Peyton's mother is a witch, then maybe they're protective spells. Should she be a vampire, then perhaps a clue to where she is currently hiding.

Again, I'm flexible with any of this. And willing to take suggestions.