[quote=@Mike the Bloodwolf]
Admittedly, this took longer then I wanted but I'm ready now baby.

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Quote: "Heroes, Villains, normal people. None of us change the people we are, but we can choose how far we go down that path. 
Name: Michael (Mike) Fertar
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Height: 6ft, 4inches
Weight: 180
Ethnicity: White British
Sexuality: HetroSexual/ Stright
Religion: None.
Occupation: Secret Agent 
Ability: Class 5 Evo: Element Manipulation, Can control all the basic elements but need to focus when it come to making new elements or by using two elements at once.
Personality: A sweet and brave young man, Mike lives his life to the fullest. He is protective of his friends and his workmates, He is also very savvy and flirty but he is also very mature and can be very Serious if he has to be though he prefers to be relaxed and calmly look at the situation in front of him with no problems. He is very smart and can work out problems quite quickly.
Background: Born to a young couple, Mike lived a perfectly normal life until his father was killed during a secret mission, Leaving behind Mike to look after his siblings and his mother but she died a few weeks later from a broken heart, Mike raised his sibling from the age of 8. 
But when he hit 13. His powers developed, he was frightened at first but with time and Patiance he learned to control them and live a normal life, even getting a girlfriend and finishing Collage and getting a degree. By the time he turned 17, he was offer the chance to follow in his father footsteps as a Secret Agent as long as he kept his powers hidden. Mike agreed and became a Secret agent, Since Mike turned 23 Quantum have been approaching him asking him to come work for them. Since his Sister recently moved back to England with her Girlfriend and His brother went off on his own, Mike has lived on his own and has his own house. He is considering taking Quantum offer but want to learn more about the company before he does anything.
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I'm gonna be honest, after some talking I have to reject this character for a couple reasons.

The first reason is the numerous spelling errors and grammatical mistakes in the profile itself, not exactly the worst thing but its a factor that was considered.

Secondly his back-story is somewhat unrealistic...his parents dying and him raising his family at the age of 13 they'd be in protective custody, and how would a child financially support his family...at that age lol. Not to mention he managed to do so much before the age of 17 what most people don't get done till their early to mid 20's and this is a realistic setting so unless there's some super powered explanation like super intelligence or something its somewhat nonsensical.

Lastly the whole bit with Quantum is also not fitting with the story, they wouldn't recruit teenagers, no organization would. And the last paragraph has some organizational issues.