[@Bainshie]
Thanks for the feedback, this really helps. As for the errors you pointed out:
I'll most likely edit into his personality that the chip ALSO malfunctioned and gave him the arrogancy, cockyness, etc.. As you said, the perfect pilot needs to be level-headed rather than just a douche who knows how to fly.
Obviously, for the part about him not coming with extremities, I do want a character who's sort of like a sci-fi Pinocchio and wants to be a human rather than an android. He won't hate all the things that don't make him human, but he'll hate most of them.
Well then, I guess I'll have to edit out the part about him replacing their First Helmsman. I guess I could just say that the UNT picked him up and assigned him to the Exeralune.