[@Dervish] Hey Derv, thanks for the feedback on my character, one thing that I wanted to mention though was that the work the Colonel had him do was part of the info that I wanted to leave out of the sheet, the one that I am supposed to PM to you and Hellis but I thought it'd be best to wait for the character to get approved before cluttering yours and Hellis's inbox. If you want I can add part of it I suppose but apart from that, thanks for the feedback (and will include the changes that you mentioned, including adding a better description in lieu of a picture)