[@Dynamo Frokane]

Interesting name choice aside, there are just a few issues I'd like to address: 

Your personality section doesn't have any flaws or any negative aspects of his personality traits. If you could include something like that and how it plays into why certain things have happened to him or because of him, I feel that would greatly improve the character. 

In your backstory, while I'm fine with the creation of lore, you've created a good chunk of it without much set-up or discussion beforehand. Could I get some more information on some of these places, maybe through PM? They don't seem very consistent, since Isa Lomita sounds like a Latin name, Port Quinlan seems...Celtic or Gaelic, maybe, Kimura sounds Japanese, and Asala could possibly be Arabic or something else eastern. Are all of these part of the same place? Different countries? There's a lot going on here, and while I don't mind possibly adding some of it, it's just a lot to take in at once and makes your backstory a bit confusing.

Finally, your character doesn't seem to have had any kind of run in with creatures of the Night, or even make any acknowledgement of them. The biggest part of this RP will be about the players--the Marked--overcoming the monsters--the Nightkin--who gave them that Mark in the first place. I highly suggest including some form of interaction with the Night, or at least discussing a plan that would allow the character to get involved even if you choose not to play as a Marked person.