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So here is my character, hope ye all enjoy him :D
Edit: oh yeah I wanted to mention our amazing GM [@Prince of Seraphs]

[hider=Tobias Thane]

[color=green][center][h1] Tobias Thane [/h1][/center][/color]

[center][img]http://i.imgur.com/ikSOfQm.jpg[/img][/center]

[color=green][b]AGE:[/b][/color] 
24

[color=green][b]GENDER:[/b][/color]
Boy

[color=green][b]RACE:[/b][/color]
Human

[color=green] [b]MARK OF THE DEMON:[/b] [/color]
Tiny pointy horns(or antlers, correct me there), pointy ears, and vampiric teeth. Black scribings on his back.

[color=green][b]PROFESSION:[/b][/color] 
Thief

[color=green][b]APPEARANCE:[/b][/color]
Tobias has a completely average height, around 1.87 meters. He has a strong physique, and an almost perfect shape and proportion. Tobias wighs at 76 kilos( I actually know this in Imperial. That's 152 pounds). He has a strong chin, and and strong cheek bones, that bring out his vibrant red eyes. His facial expressions is stone cold like a murderer's by default, and his black hair is totally on point with that vibe.

He sticks with his ranger clothing he inherited from his dead father. From bottom to top, it is engraved leather boots, that go knee height. He waers brown trousers, that are held by a long silver belt that wraps around his waist multiple times. Below it is a set of green clothes that are attached to the trouser. A brown leather and and fur shirt is on his chest, covered up mostly by a grenn jacket, lined with silver strings. The jacket comes with a hood, long enough to hide his identity if needed, and always good enoguh to hide the fact that he is not completely normal. There is another belt going around his chest, hold in place his small tunic/poncho he wears. His arms are covered in belts (he must really like belts) that keep in place his bracers. The set ends with a long green fingerless glove.

His whole appearance is focused around silver lining and engravings, and most of his equipment is at least silver-like. That includes a neck bandana with small silver strings spiraling in front of his mouth, with teh usual silver linings.

[color=green][b]PERSONALITY:[/b][/color]
Tobias suffers mild personality issues. His mood can greatly affect his personality. However it always revolves around his cold and realistic, yet happy-to-go-lucky attitude. He is vary of new people, but usually acts natural. He sometimes acts crazy when with his friends, but only if teh situation requires so. That is when things become boring, or there is an oppurtinity for a good pun or joke. He is passive towards most things, until he is involved in them, and can ultimately become the leading charcater, from a quiet side character. However one thing never changes: he is an asshole who insult everyone slightly, but never to hurt them. Tobias sworned not to leave anyone behind of his companions.

[color=green][b]BIO:[/b][/color]
Tobias was born into a small farmer family. When his mother was pregnant with him, a demon, a vampire of some sort attacked his parents. His father fought teh demon off, but it left a scar on his mother's belly, which eventually corrupted his blood too, forming him ever so slightly into a vampire like human. He did not inherit any powers or needs (like blood sucking) but demonic resemblences started to show up, starting by his horn. His parents wanted to keep him, but eventually the townflok wanted to kill him, so his father took him into an abandoned ranger hideout in the forest. He learned to hunt, use knives and daggers, perfected his usage of bow, and set up traps for small animals. Tobias soon had a knowledge of nature, like none other, and practiced alchemy with the herbs around him. He learned to craft poisons and healing potions that sped up the healing of injuries, or helped with insomnia. His favourite thing however was to run around the forest, climbing hills and tress, leaping from branch to branch, scaling all the boulders.

But all good things must pass. When he was 14, he and his father were ambushed by bandits, and only by sacrificing himself his father managed to get an opening for him to escape. Since the time he spent in the forest alone, and rarely visited by his parents, his mother went to live in Veiron, to be a secretary at the castle (Not the today's secretary, but the one that acted as n assistant for higher ups). However her prestigious work didn't allow her to let him live at her house. So Tobias lived on teh streets and learned how to pickpocket. He could always escape from law enforcement thanks to his skills acquired in the wilderness. The streets toughened him, and slowly he gained his humanity back, his eyes fading black from the red. That is untilt eh demons arrived. He was visiting his mother when the hell hit earth, and they had to run like all teh others. His mother gave him a letter that his father left for him, before she was taken away by a demon. In the process Tobias inhaled the corrupted air, and the infested souls infused with his evil blood, growing him more inhumane than ever. Thanks only to this and his medicinal skills he survived, leaving a big black marking on his back as a reminder: never mess with the forces of evil.

Upon investigating the letter, he found the shocking truth: his father was responsible for his dealing with the devil. He was the one who arranged the demon to come by, just so he can save him from the purge to come. The letter didn't tell how his father knew of this, but it marked a location on an attached map, where he left his final gift. Tobias ventured out to their old homestead, and found a small hatch leading to a cellar. Magic infused lights and other freaks covered the place, which led to a few conclusions about his fathers real identity. But amongst all the mess was one thing of interest in particular: A magical suit made for him by his father, along with a bow hand made from ebony wood. He set out to find a new life amongst the mess, living off the chaos, thieving and doing all to survive. He soon was known as the Green Demon by the townsfolk.

[color=green][b]EQUIPMENT:[/b][/color]
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[*][color=green]Short Sword[/color]: A small sword, conviently named "short sword" with a small green gemstone embed into the handle. if dark, the gemstones and the sword light up, illuminatig a an area in fron of him, even if it's in the holster. (I am not sure but I think it is around 1.7 inches. Not sure about imperial measurement >.< )
[*][color=green]Ebony Bow°[/color]: A hunting bow made of ebony wood, is a gift from Tobias's father. It is completely black, covered in silver and grenn straps in order to provide fricion, and make it better to handle. it is not big, around the size of a short bow, but it is recurved, which makes it compact but powerful.
[*][color=green]Magical Suit[/color]: No name for this one. A magical ranger suit from his dad, that turns out to do a few things. Hides his identity from any magic users that could discover his evil blood, grows with his size, and can rapair itself if cut. It helps contain his evil self, so he may never go amd from the corruption in his blood. It is what kept him sane all these years. 
[*][color=green]Throwing daggers[/color]: He learned how to use throwing daggers and axes whilst he was in the forest. He is really accurate with them, and prefers to use them over the bow if possible, simply out of the reason that they are easier to access. He carries 6 with himself.
[*][color=green]Travel bag[/color]: More like a satchel, this contraption is something he found in his father's lab. A handy piece of equipment that can store more items that one can look out of it. It is really just a small brown bag with a silver string to hold it together, but if opened, one will see the huge space inside it.
[*]Basic rations, water, gauzes, ropes, herbs of various kinds for making potions, oil for lanterns
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Notes: He might be gay.[/hider][/quote]

First we don't have vampires, too many cliches, stigmas and contradictory lore surrounding them to be worth including but not make a main focus of the story.

Second the Mark of the Demons is supposed to be from proximity to Veiron on the day of the fall. Ordinary people who encounter demons (assuming they survive) don't come away with demonic marks.

Then there are a couple of things that were vague enough for me to be confused in the last couple of paragraphs. So his dad arranged for his pregnant wife to be attacked by a demon... because that would somehow save his unborn son from a cataclysm fourteen years in the future of which he should have had no knowledge? I'm not sure about the reasoning behind this.

"Magic infused lights and other freaks covered the place, which led to a few conclusions about his fathers real identity." Maybe I'm dense but I have no idea what these conclusions are supposed to be. He has a hidden lair covered in magical artifacts and stuff. There's many conclusions one could draw from that: He is secretly a Djinn demon in a human body who fell in love with a mortal (bit cliched but wouldn't be the first time), he's one of the only remaining arcane smiths capable of making magical artifacts, he killed people and stole magic from them. The list goes on. Overall I'm going to need some more clarity with regards to Tobias' father cause at the moment I'm not sure what to think of him.

Also magical artifacts, especially weapons such as the sword he has are incredibly rare so if you want him to have such a sword there needs to be an explanation of where he got it.

This isn't really related to the CS but Valeria has a thieves town a days journey north of where all our characters are at the moment called Ashbourne which my character was on her way towards if that holds any possibilities for you.