[quote=@Mifuyne]
 Miraluka
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A Miraluka = an instant no.

Also Non-Human means exactly as it suggests. [i]Non-Human[/i]. For Ellri the less human the better, with the exception that Galactic Basic is a must.

[@Deamonbane] As an experienced kinda guy I'm going to give advice. Before Ellri and Fallen review your sheet (before I go into why, note I am not noted for subtly. I'm a blunt person so just incase you're a sensitive person I mean no offense).

I got to the flaws section of your sheet, and gave up. I read the secrets today, and again. Ignored your history. Your entire character concept is cliché and overused, not just in this Roleplay but in almost every other roleplay I have seen involving Jedi. There is always one [i]if not more[/i] who are rogues to the council! Make their own rules! Lucky the council lets them remain as Jedi!

I have to be honest, where's the fun in that? What makes it interesting? What makes it Original?