[quote=@bloonewb] [@KabenSaal] It's extremely detailed, which I like, but it doesn't really explain how your character is involved in the jungle explorations. Also, keep in mind it's a fantasy world, and Germany doesn't exist. Neither does India or the Americas. [/quote] Ahh. It does need a little tweeking I guess. But, she's a mercenary, so she could be hired as protection. I could change the names if you wanted.