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Also your character looks okay, but dangerously close to being of the Devil.

That's actually because of the fighting and partying. I notice characters of Justice tend to try and avoid fights if they can (based on characters appearing in the games), but if they must, they'll do it, usually with little hesitation. They're very resolve-driven people.

The partying can stay just don't party too crazy, but the fighting needs to change to suit the arcana.

Once that's done your character is fine anyway.

Also if you want me to design your Persona you're free to ask me, just PM me and we'll talk. I offer this to everyone who joins, plus their Ultimates.

I also feel you can find a better Persona than Angel. I think someone like Joan of Arc would suit your character for instance.