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Name: Kellina Fairbairn

Epithet(s): Kellee and Young Smokey

Age: 16

School Year: First

Gender: female

Appearance: [img]http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/hayatexblade/images/5/5c/Kibi.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20150114174458[/img]

Nationality: scotland  

Personality: Kellee is generally little hot head, outgoing and sarcastic and very proud of her family and skills. And despite her tough exterior, she cares a lot for her friends and family.

Bio: When Kellee was born, her and her family move to Faroe islands to be safe from their rival assassins they were after them. when kellee was 6 her father train her to be a assassin, combat and swordsmanship, but buy the time she was 14 something horrible happen.

her father rival found them, with no time her father give her, her sister and her mother airplane to Russian and give kellee his family sword, his dagger and paper sheet to убийца академия Avademy for assassin and that was last time she saw her father.

after her family move to Russian kellee train long and hard to be assassin and when she is was finally 16 she was inrolled убийца академия and it was time to follow her father footsteps and take her revenge for the rivals who taka away her father.

Weapon: [url=http://www.toledosword.com/im/Scottish_William_Wallace_Sword_by_Marto.jpg]Her family sword[/url] and [url=http://www.freeideals.com.au/store/CubeCart-latest/images/uploads/dagger%20mini%20opener%20ks5845%2002.jpg]Father dagger[/url]

Equipment: her music player with headphones, a flip phone and photo of her family

Skills: she can speak in English, Scottish and Danish, her father teach Kellee Swordsmanship

Talents: due from the fact that she's from family of blacksmith she know how to make swords and knife.

Other: when she was little she want to be a composer when she grow up but she chose to be a assassin but she still holding on to that dream, she have a older sister name [url=http://images4.fanpop.com/image/answers/1891000/1891691_1313578704927.11res_480_300.jpg]Melody[/url]

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Please don't think of me as jerk or singling you out, but could you flesh your character out a bit more, make the personality and backstory a little longer.