-Comments while reading
I can see pictures!
Oh fuck, Jem's adorable as a child!
"vanishing twin" ...corpse party...

*stops thinking as I read*
Well fuck.

I think that Jem should find out about Eric's problem when he starts sorting his life out. A while after he becomes determined. Jem always knew there was something stressful and off about him. That when Jem pushed him against the wall, he had a mini panic attack and that might have been a misunderstanding for the two of them.

I also like the idea that Eric wanted to be like Jem and took up smoking, now that he's a teacher he's always trying to quit but failing.

I'd totally love to rp their sophomore year *v*