[quote=@Gisk]
Oh, you know what, I forgot about the bit where Duck likes us to show rather than tell, I gave my guy a bit more internal monologue than I should have.  

I'm honestly just really used to that being what's expected.  I'll have more direct posts in future.  But not this second, I'll let other people catch up so it's not Undying, Duck and myself posting in a circle.  
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That's cool, I'm also more used to writing out internal dialogue but I wanted to try something new for this game. We'll get used to it before long, I'm sure :)