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[@Silent Observer]

Ahh let me know what you think of the Aila post! I need feedback!
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I loved it, particularly the nightmare sequence! I began my writing days as a poet, so I can really appreciate your use of sentence structure to create the almost [i]violent[/i]  imagery of the nightmare. I'm not sure if that is the right word, but I'm going with it. In cave man terms: Me like post.

Also, done reading the IC posts, now to the OOC and then hunkering down to crank out this CS.