Well ... I certainly didn't know you did art work, Nevis! You're definitely onto something with those drawings and having them really adds more life to the story. I especially like the way you implemented the clothing patterns and anticipate future revisions! You'll have to update us on the progress of all those sketches and show us your sketching progressions because the rough drafts have a ton of potential 8). I'll have to draft more sketches of my own so ... let's keep this up, Nevis, and together, we'll grow as writers, draftsmen, and artists! In the future, I intend to free hand sketch and paint these two images to bring several characters to life in the visual format: [URL=http://smg.photobucket.com/user/JAZZCAVE/media/Ona%20Image%20Trace_zpspaexzetk.jpg.html][IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v428/JAZZCAVE/Ona%20Image%20Trace_zpspaexzetk.jpg[/IMG][/URL] and [URL=http://smg.photobucket.com/user/JAZZCAVE/media/Roseanna%20de%20Lion%20Heart%20Pose%20-%20Image%20Trace_zpsrdlvyhgf.jpg.html][IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v428/JAZZCAVE/Roseanna%20de%20Lion%20Heart%20Pose%20-%20Image%20Trace_zpsrdlvyhgf.jpg[/IMG][/URL]