[@Vilageidiotx] Thank you for your feedback! (I'm not completely sure how to pronounce the title either, I only looked up how it was written)
This is actually not a personal experience. I don't do sports and I only recently began to watch ice-skating a bit, because my OC is an ice-skater. So that was flattering. 
That part about droning, I see what you're getting at. I didn't know I used descriptors, I'm not exactly sure what they are either, but my aim was to submit a descriptive piece and explore expository writing with it. So, I don't know if using descriptors or not falls under that or not. 
The explanation in the hider was basically to explain the title and the language it was written in. The information about the competition itself was woven into the story, some of it anyway. But if I would let this piece read to Dutch people, depending on the age most will know what the eleven city tour is and I basically wanted to give the foreign readers the same advantage. And that part about the language itself didn't fit in the story. Still, I see what you're getting at and it would have been better to put it after the story to answer questions people may have after reading it. I like you appreciate the educational parts of my entry

[@WrongEndoftheRainbow] Right! Okay, I didn't know conscience was an actual word. I did put it in Google, but didn't get any results. Well, only results of a Belgian writer called Hendrik Conscience. Also it was spelled as consience in the piece, which didn't really help looking it up. But hey, learned something new :) Thanks.

[@Dark Wind]I'll definitely continue to try and read poetry like that.