[quote=@kagethekiller]
[@Blackbeard]Ill try to fix the fictional part thanks for noticing that meant to use the link to the real one but used the first one on accident, also Im not really that good at using the site language but i can try to fix some stuff in the text if that's the problem. 
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It's not so much of a problem I just think you'd have more success, a little bit of constructive crit to try and help this RP be a bit more accessible. From experience an incredibly well organized and well presented RP regardless of content, will garner more interest than a fantastic gem of an idea that looks poor (Not saying this looks poor BTW but could be touched up)

So any answer on the plot front?