[quote=@Blackbeard]
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It's not so much of a problem I just think you'd have more success, a little bit of constructive crit to try and help this RP be a bit more accessible. From experience an incredibly well organized and well presented RP regardless of content, will garner more interest than a fantastic gem of an idea that looks poor (Not saying this looks poor BTW but could be touched up)

So any answer on the plot front? 
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there will be a plot along the normal lines for now of there being a bad mage to take down but Idea's are welcome it started very sandboxy its slowly evolving but lmk if that looks more appealing? i put in some more effort to listen to what you meant