[@Zeroth]

This is a fantastic start, I’d wager. Whilst everything is sufficiently explained through your inventory and your skills & talents, are you sure you want to go with the Gift of Rebirth that you went with? Whilst it is workable and perfectly fine, I imagine having a little diversity might be viable. As the CS stands I could easily accept it, though. 

[@ClocktowerEchos]

Edoric looks fantastic and I’d be interested in how he will play out, though I am particularly concerned that you went with a rather under-powered (comparatively) Gift of Rebirth. While the idea of having a compass that works in such a way is fascinating, wouldn’t you want to build up the gift that was granted by the gods given the nature of such rebirth? If you are fine with the gift as is, I won’t contest it as this is just inquiry at this point— your CS is plenty acceptable otherwise.

[@Zamokra41]

Unfortunately, this doesn’t seem to give off any of the vibes I was looking for and seems to be contradictory to the pre-apocalyptic tone where our characters descend from. For example, while this is a fine CS on its own it doesn’t really [i]fit[/i] for a character who has been reawakened. I wrote nothing of “The Void” and I imagine necromancy wasn’t really a point of study in the old world nor was the concept of raising skeletons, horrors, or the like— understand that the abominations that we often see in Dark Fantasy settings came with the dawn of the Inalienable Dreamless which was an event that happened sometime after your unfortunate demise. There’s also the problem with demonic whispers and such. Lastly, there’s the whole “new gods” statement which makes no sense. There are no mention of new or old and… well, it’s incorrect. I’m not sure if I like the prospect of an “eldritch horror” transformation either.

For those reasons I’d have to decline the concept you’ve presented, sorry.