[@Pikmin Eye]

So overall, your CS looks fine to me but a few things first. I'm not sure if guns are allowed in this world so you'll have to consult [@KoL] when they're done being busy. But other than that, Rander seems fine to me. Now onto his Spirit. He also seems fine, though maybe using the name and appearance of Japan's most famous Kaijuu can be tweaked. Perhaps your own original spin on things? It almost seems like you just slapped that on him; other than that, I don't see anything wrong with the Spirit as long as you understand you can't just have him rampaging cities at random when growing to full size.

Also, welcome to the Guild. Enjoy the despair~