[@Wishful Stray] - Ratha is accepted, nothing much I can comment on beyond that. 

[@Zamokra41] - A lot more in tone with things me and Molly have built here, and I like that it takes the idea of Badarium's defensive warrior culture and spins it. Nice mentions of the lustful pretext of the higher nobility of Badarium, and the character seems fairly well rounded. Unless Molly has some points to add I think this is good too.