So I'll give you all some late feedback so you know what to change (if anything) on your profile


[@Xandrya] Very strong profile, I cant see any changes that need to be made.

[@sassy1085] Backstory should be a little more detailed, significant grammar issues need to be adressed

[@Savage] Strong Profile, but the weapons category wasnt needed, youll get the weapons assigned when the IC starts

[@Roosan] The Wire references were done tastefully, and I like the backstory, but I wish it was made with a bit more mention to the cyberpunk world and references to the timeline. But overall, strong profile.

[@LetMeDoStuff] Very strong profile, be sure to add in the parts of Greg's knowledge of Mack to establish that mutual acknowledgement between the two.

[@Skepic] Very Strong Profile, would have been even stronger if you didn't take out that awesome humming theme tune.

[@Kurai Assassin]
Good profile, still would like a little bit more of a fleshed out backstory, and very minor spelling and grammar to be addressed.

[@LokiLeo789]
Very strong profile. No changes need to be made.

[@PURRfect93]
Good character concept, but many grammatical errors need to be addressed. Backstory could use a bit more detail and fleshing out.


Let me know if you have any more specific questions, feel free to ask me here in the OOC.