[quote=@FantasyChic]
Ok I re-did her bio to give her a bit more color to her past and why she is more about the day-to-day. I wanted to leave it a bit open-ended because I think she will grow more as a person as we go on. If there is anything else I need, like if you want me to highlight what makes her tick so she isn't a Mary Sue, let me know.
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[S]Did you post the sheet twice? The one I've linked on the OP hasn't been edited since 12 days ago.[/S]

I should be wearing my glasses.