[quote=@Penultimate_Pi]
[@Dynamo Frokane] Please let me know if the additional backstory I produced in my post is acceptable. I only brought it up as something to create conflict for Jay himself, it doesn't need to be relevant in the story itself if you don't want it.
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Seems fine so far, it wont effect the main plot in any major way so its good for me.