[quote=@Slypheed]
My post ain't much, and probably doesn't look the best. But I didn't want to stay out anymore since I pushed past my case of writers block.
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Meh, you did fine. No one says you have to write twelve paragraphs to get a good point across or to describe a really action packed fight, but I think any RP gets better as each writer begins to understand not only their own character, but those around. Just take a few moments to clear your head and strap yourself into your characters situations. 

Also, if you're not already, it's good idea to quickly outline your thoughts & actions, then you have a springboard when the time comes to bring it all together in a post :)