[color=red][b]yadda yadda review in red[/b][/color] [quote=@j8cob] [hider=Ari Aria] [center][img]http://safebooru.org//images/1402/fa9a69d65b585faf21725c35daca6943938c855e.png?1468999[/img] [color=deeppink][i]“Eh, maybe later.”[/i][/color] [color=red][b]cool[/b][/color] [url=https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TPfa5VuTVN4]The Wall[/url] [color=red][b]didn't even click it you mong[/b][/color] [b]Ari may be petite, standing at only 5' 2", but she is rather athletic with toned muscles and no real "curves". While one can consider her overall appearance to be cute she never has a particularly cute expression. In general she always appears as if she is bored or disinterested in whatever is going on. Her wardrobe is sparse in coverage, despite the climate of Kumogakure. Only in particularly cold environments will she wear a coat, but no matter how hot it gets she will never take off her hat. Oddly enough, she has the exact same outfit but with reversed colors though she rarely wears it. If one cannot recognize her by her distinct clothing choices, her pink hair and matching irises are standout features.[/b][/center] [color=red][b]she sounds kinda stupid based on the fact that she buys the same clothes but with reverse color[/b][/color] [hr] [u][b][color=deeppink]Personnel files.[/color][/b][/u] [i]Access only by security personnel with a C3 clearance.[/i] [indent]【[U][color=deeppink]Full Name[/color][/U]】 [I]Ari Aria[/I] [color=red][b]this is the dumbest name i ever heard possibly[/b][/color] 【[U][color=deeppink]Alias[/color][/U]】 [i]Hard Body[/i] [color=red][b]wtf[/b][/color] 【[U][color=deeppink]Village[/color][/U]】 [i]Kumogakure[/i] 【[U][color=deeppink]Age[/color][/U]】 [i]16[/i] [color=red][b]you call her ''hard body'' but then make her illegal, wtf[/b][/color] 【[U][color=deeppink]Sex[/color][/U]】 [i]Female[/i] 【[U][color=deeppink]Sexuality[/color][/U]】 [i]Bisexual[/i] 【[U][color=deeppink]Birthplace[/color][/U]】 [i]Kumogakure[/i] 【[U][color=deeppink]Bloodline[/color][/U]】 [i]Oshiro - A small clan that has a history of producing shinobi. The head family of the clan is known to have a gene for Steel Release, though not every descendant has gotten it.[/i] [color=red][b]but i bet she does[/b][/color] 【[U][color=deeppink]Rank[/color][/U]】 [i]Chūnin[/i][/indent] [hr] [u][b][color=deeppink]Psych. report.[/color][/b][/u] [i]Medical secrecy applies.[/i] [indent]【[U][color=deeppink]Personality[/color][/U]】 [i]If one word had to be used it would be "lazy". She is slow and sluggish in her movements, she avoids physical activity as much as possible, and often ignores people altogether to avoid the hassle of conversation. [color=red][b]めんどくせー....[/b][/color] It helps that she isn't particularly interested in many things due to her reclusive and introverted tendencies. It isn't a matter of shyness or some kind of phobia; Ari just doesn't care about much in life. She hardly even cares for herself, showing an incredibly high tolerance to verbal or even physical abuse. Only when forced to act will Ari shed her slow nature and become active. Whether this be in preservation of her own life or on the orders of someone with authority over her makes a difference, but ultimately she isn't a horrible person and will listen to the commands or opinions of others when in a dire situation. [color=red][b]what an asshole[/b][/color] While she doesn't like people in general, she doesn't like the idea of people dying. It's a morbid threshhold she doesn't like to cross. For this reason she not only will protect people from dying but she will also try to avoid killing her enemies. [color=red][b]dumbass [/b][/color]Of course she has killed before but if given an opportunity she will simply incapacitate enemies and take them alive. Some misconstrue this trait as hidden sympathy and consider her "tsundere" but that isn't quite true. She isn't hiding any kind of feelings for people, she often doesn't have any to begin with. [color=red][b]Saburo 2.0 [/b][/color]Her baseline morals aren't very stellar but they are strong enough to give her some level of conviction, even if others can't see it at times. She isn't a particularly emotional person so it would be quite the sight to see her express herself, but at this point nobody expects her to ever express her feelings. She barely even has any, and some might dare say she has none at all. Perhaps she simply represses everything and just bottles up her emotions because she doesn't see any use in them. That would be quite cynical of her but her family believes this to be the explanation for her lack of personality.[/i] [color=red][b]blehbleh[/b][/color] 【[U][color=deeppink]History[/color][/U]】 [i]Ari's story begins with her heritage. [color=red][b]duh[/b][/color] Her biological father, Kenichi Oshiro, lost his senses to liquor and forced himself onto the beer maiden of the bar, Ayaka Aria. The crime was covered up by the Oshiro clan, as Kenichi was a member of the head family and was next in line to become the clan's leader, but the incident resulted in Ayaka's impregnation. Kenichi and the Oshiro clan denied it was his doing and claimed Ayaka was lying to get some kind of reward from them when the child was surely that of her husband's, Makoto. After Aria was born with the same hair and eye color as her mother, there was no evidence to prove Ayaka's claim and the case was dismissed once more. It wouldn't be for several years before this would come up again. The girl was raised modestly in a poor but humble home. Neither of her parents held particularly good jobs and there wasn't much money to go around but the Aria family did just fine. It wasn't until Ari displayed shinobi prowess and manifested her Kekkei Genkai did anything of interest happen. At this point the Oshiro clan couldn't deny Ari any longer. In fact, they had a complete heel-face-turn and offered to take Ari in so they could raise her. While Ayaka and Makoto were unsure, young Ari adamantly refused. After pursuing this for several years, eventually Ari came to a compromise in that the Oshiro would train her but she wouldn't become part of their family. [color=red][b]what an absolute meron[/b][/color] It was an insulting blow to the Oshiro, especially her biological father, but it was better for them than just letting her run around with their Steel Release freely. Kenichi wasn't a completely terrible person. He wasn't a good role model by any stretch of the imagination, but his public appearance made him look good and he genuinely cared about Ari once he realized she was actually his daughter. The feeling wasn't mutual, however, as Ari rather didn't care for him. He expected she would despise him and reject him, but he found it was much worse that she simply wouldn't even acknowledge him. It drove him to depression, but to this day he still tries to reach out to his daughter. He has even apologized to the Aria family, multiple times, in a bid for Ari's affection. But to no avail. Instead she barely paid him any attention, and only then it was for learning how to use her Kekkei Genkai. Once she graduated the Academy and became a Genin she stopped caring about Kenichi altogether. [color=red][b]she's a real ashole[/b][/color] But that behavior wasn't reserved to her father. Ari didn't care about much of anything. She did what she was told for the most part, but there was never any enthusiasm or passion. Even in the Academy the teachers noticed that while she had some talent and skill she almost seemed as if she didn't even want to be there. Either way she became a shinobi. While she was a very adept fighter she wouldn't fight very often, instead preferring to support her allies and let them do most of the work. Her usefulness wasn't ever questioned because of this, but some did think that she could become a powerful shinobi if she put her mind to it. After a few years of consistently completing missions she has become somewhat respected for what she does, despite the fact she could definitely do more. She has recently been promoted to Chuunin, a testament to her success with missions and personal growth, but Ari hasn't felt any different with the promotion. She still doesn't do much as a shinobi, she still doesn't make friends, and she still doesn't care about her family or village. She doesn't even care enough to wonder why she doesn't care.[/i][color=red][b] it's 1 am sorry, this is tl;dr for me. the summary: she doesn't care the end[/b][/color] 【[U][color=deeppink]Family ties[/color][/U]】 [i]While Ari is the product of rape she has actually been raised by both her mother's and her father's families. And while both families genuinely care for her, in their own unique ways, Ari has never really reciprocated those feelings. Her detached nature meant she has never been close to anyone in her family, despite how they may feel like they are close with her. To Ari, her family is just another bunch of people she so happens to share blood with. But her whole, extended family deeply cares for her and are often concerned because of her behavior. While her two families don't get along with each other they at least share something in common: Ari.[/i] [b]Ayaka Aria | Biological Mother | 37, Kumogakure, bartender[/b] [b]Makoto Aria | Father Figure | 38, Kumogakure, has a new job almost weekly[/b] [b]Kenichi Oshiro | Biological Father | 45, Oshiro Clan Compound, a jounin for Kumogakure and a figurehead within the Oshiro clan[/b] [b]Isamu Oshiro | Paternal Grandfather | 70, Oshiro Clan Compound, retired jounin and the Clan Leader for the Oshiro clan [/b] 【[U][color=deeppink]Dreams and fears[/color][/U]】 [i]If anyone was to ask Ari what dreams and fears she has she probably wouldn't even answer but if she did she would say [color=deeppink]"none"[/color]. Ari has no real goal in her life. She lives on a day-to-day basis, taking orders from someone or another and getting by like that. And to the same effect there isn't really much that will stir fear in her heart. She doesn't worry about many things. But, just maybe deep down inside, she might just have dreams and fears. There'd be no way to pry that from her by her own volition, but it just may be there.[/i][/indent] [color=red][b]probably she doesn't wanna die. just a hunch bro.[/b][/color] [hr] [u][b][color=deeppink]Combat reports.[/color][/b][/u] [i]Gathered from evaluation reports after missions.[/i] [indent]【[U][color=deeppink]Fighting style[/color][/U]】 [i]While Ari is a lazy individual, when she is fighting she is more active. Being that most of her techniques have minimal range she relies heavily on Taijutsu to defeat her opponents. Her greatest assets come from her Kekkei Genkei, meaning she can tank most any attack thrown at her and if she can land a blow it will result in broken bones at the very least. Despite her small size she is deceptively strong, even before using her Steel Release, meaning she is quite the bruiser that isn't afraid to go after the bigger enemies. She isn't very fast, but she is far from slow. So she will either provide defensive measures for her squad or, if the situation calls for it, she will chase down a foe to beat them into submission. While she prefers to grapple with opponents and defeat them with wrestling she is perfectly capable of fighting on her feet, in which case she often deals even more damage with her attacks than with wrestling her opponents. This doesn't get to happen often as she is usually reserved to supporting her team by protecting them from enemy attacks, which she is actually quite good at when she is in the mood.[/i] 【[U][color=deeppink]Kekkei genkai, or bloodline limit[/color][/U]】 [b][u]Bloodline limit name:[/u][/b] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Steel_Release]Steel Release[/url][/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]An advanced nature chakra release. Though diverse in application it is not weak by any stretch of the imagination. Users of Steel Release can produce steel weapons or turn their body into steel to become immune to most forms of attack, providing both defensive and offensive options. While they cannot manipulate the created weapons or constructs, they can break them down and "repurpose" other steel objects around them in the world. This means they can alter pre-existing weapons provided it is made of steel.[/i] [b][u]Strengths:[/u][/b] [i]Using steel as an element provides for very sturdy results. Users of Steel Release are insanely durable but are also capable of forming unique weapons or even many weapons for expendable use. Even if a user isn't physically strong, Steel Release makes their Taijutsu more effective by increasing the damage of their attacks since their body has become like steel.[/i] [b][u]Weaknesses:[/u][/b] [i]The biggest weakness would have to be the range of Steel Release techniques. The user of Steel Release has no range, being only capable of creating weapons from their own hands or altering steel products by touch. Likewise, despite being incredibly resilient, Lightning techniques and Fire techniques can still do damage with enough output.[/i] [color=red][b]well, range isn't really a weakness, more a limit, but besides that this is fine[/b][/color] 【[U][color=deeppink]Ninja techniques[/color][/U]】 [u]A rank techniques:[/u] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Steel_Release:_Impervious_Armour]Steel Release: Impervious Armor[/url][/i] [u]B rank techniques:[/u] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Steel_Release:_Steel_Shield_Technique]Steel Release: Steel Shield Technique[/url] Steel Release: Deconstruction Technique[/i] [u]C rank techniques:[/u] [i][url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Steel_Release:_Steel_Projectile]Steel Release: Steel Projectile[/url] Steel Release: Blacksmith[/i] [u]D-E rank techniques:[/u] [i]Academy Techniques[/i] 【[U][color=deeppink]Custom made techniques[/color][/U]】 [b][u]Jutsu name:[/u][/b] [i]Steel Release: Blacksmith[/i] [b][u]Rank:[/u][/b] [i]C[/i] [b][u]Range:[/u][/b] [i]Very Close[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]The user converts their chakra into steel, creating a weapon made purely from steel. The variety of weapons is nigh unlimited, but larger weapons will not only be heavier but take more chakra to create. In general these weapons are heavier than their "normal" counterparts (like regular katanas will be much lighter than created katanas, shuriken will be lighter than created shuriken, etc). Only one weapon can be created at a time and the weapon is only created at the user's hands, but weapons can be created rapidly to compensate this.[/i] [color=red][b]okay[/b][/color] [b][u]Jutsu name:[/u][/b] [i]Steel Release: Deconstruction Technique[/i] [b][u]Rank:[/u][/b] [i]B[/i] [b][u]Range:[/u][/b] [i]Touch[/i] [b][u]Description:[/u][/b] [i]By touching an object that is made of steel, the user can either change its shape (within the parameters of how much material it has) or convert it into chakra that they can absorb. The chakra conversion isn't very substantial, but it can help a Steel Release user fight longer by taking enemy weapons away and powering themselves further.[/i] [color=red][b]I like this but I feel like it's important that perhaps it's limited to, say, small steel items like a kunai or so that you could dissipate quickly. You know. To avoid absorbing skyscrapers.[/b][/color] [/indent] [/hider] [/quote] [color=red][b]Look at my comments, edit some stuff you feel neccesary and place it in the character bin.[/b][/color]