First off, thank you for bringing all of our discussion over. 

But more to the point, that is a clever idea, but I don't really think we should have the main plot be one of comedy. It would be great if there was humor in a happenstance sort of way, but I am really not into straight-up comedy in writing. I do not know what your tastes are (as I've only just met you and have yet to read any of your writing :P ), but I enjoy a deeper, more serious plot.