[@Corporal Hicks] The sheet looks good but I'd like to see some more added to the backstory. Describe his life during the war? How'd he end up with PTSD? Why is he so racist against Indians? Was it the war that caused that. Describe that.

[@King Tai] Also looks good, keep up with it.

[@Avanhelsing] If you really want to, you could do a full blooded Native. That'd be more realistic I think.

[@Treshan] It's all good so far, keep working on it.

[@Vandy] Yeah, you can cuss as much as you'd like. Racism was pretty commonplace back then.

[@ayzrules] The RP is open for anyone to join, and that'd be great.