Sheets should be longer and personality should be more along the lines as the ones in this link. [url]http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/125599-mobile-suit-gundam-londo-bells-rising/char#post-3624578[/url]

In particular the history needs much more about him personally. 

As a canon persona Narcissus should be linked. Starting skills should be bufu not garu. I'll allow Marin Karin to stay over resist mind if that's your preference.