[@Prince of Seraphs] Excellent, thank you.  Ooh, I like your ruler.  Archon is the equivalent of King?  ...Hm, what would you say to some sort of fey with strong elemental affinities working for Archon?  I'll read through your char sheet more closely to see if I want her born before or after the change in rulers, but I'd like Sini to be a knight or an advisor or something.  Would you be okay with that?  ...That might make Archon Max's master, actually, which could be fun.

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Critique of a character isn't criticism of you as a person.  None of what Prince said sounds ill-natured to me.

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