[@Billsomething] if you could break up your CS into neater spaced paragraphs that would be great. I'd like a slightly larger backstory but I see you are going with the mysterious stranger so I'll let this one by. Approved.

[@Haru Nyan] Very good! Approved

[@rechonq] You keep mentioning 'sword's edge' when I think you mean Soul Edge, other than that the CS seems fine, but what is that nationality? I don't think I'm familiar with it.