[quote=@Inkdrop]
[@Willy Vereb]I would like to point out that some of the details on your vessel were somewhat gratuitous. Brevity is important. I am not sure if we need every technical detail and the exact specifications of every system and every component aboard your vessel - it makes it less interesting and more like reading an instruction book. Its a lot of fun thought experimenting to come up with that stuff, but its just too much and you inflate your CS while making it less enjoyable for others.
[/quote]It was made for another game which had a more detailed CS for the ships.
Granted, I was longwinded even by that game's standards. Well, it's right in my title why.
As for the actual critique, your mileage vary. People have varying tolerance to "tech porn".