thanks so much to everyone who's reviewed mine so far (uposatha)! going into this i knew mine was going to be kinda weird and obscure, but i find myself proud of it nonetheless. that said, your critiques are definitely being heard. honestly i was going to wait to do this until after the review/voting period was over, but what the hell. 

my story is meant to be a broad (lol [i]very[/i] broad) reimagining of the [url=https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moon_rabbit#Folklore]moon rabbit legend[/url]. whether or not this sheds light on it or answers some questions is a whole other story, but hopefully it can provide at least a bit of context to those who are confused. thanks again to everyone who took the time to read and review mine so far~