[@Alkali] A few things:

[indent]1). You can probably incorporate fears/sexuality into the personality section. I never really got why people feel like it deserves it's own section. lol

2). While I did say you could be brief on the backstory, I'm wondering where her powers came into play (Like when/how did they manifest, etc).

3). You should expand on the power section just a tad... I want to know some examples of some potential applications, etc.

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Otherwise, I think she's a good character.