[hider=Response to RomanAria]Er. Someone who fights because of the main character. The Ruwdans are only fighting on Earth because Kurt fled there. How exactly is that not ”fighting because of them”? ... Oh, well.

I'm happy you found things about my entry worthy of being described as ”beautiful” and ”lovely”, haha. … Yeah, now that you point that out, that one sentence is very odd. My apologies for that. And, er... I naturally structure my paragraphs as I find them the most readable. Which, er, ends up being like that. Hm. Not sure what I can do about that. Oh, well.

Thank you for your review.[/hider]

[hider=Response to Terminal]... Ignore my last post, that's not what I was thinking at all. I did not get the memo that it had to be allies that destroyed everything. Because, the enemy is entirely driven by want. They want nothing more than to hunt down Kurt Fortitude. The degree they want him is enough to hunt him across the galaxy and declare wars on worlds just because he landed upon them. That was my reasoning. And then, on top of that, the world would not have been destroyed had not humanity been inspired by Kurt to fight with him to take back their planet. Essentially this results in Earth being destroyed in a war about who gets Kurt Fortitude. And that's what I saw as that it would pass the criteria. … Oh, well. Oh, well. OH, WELL.

Yeah, the detail about that Ruwdan limbs detaching when injured was something I came up with during the planning-phase, but somehow it never ended up in the story until way back then because my own failure to actually make use of it before then... XD

In any case, yeah. I do believe I see what you're saying. Hm. I shall see what I can do next time I write an action-scene.

Tihi. I really liked my odds-thing. It was inspired by that, in the scenario, the odds are heavily, HEAVILY stacked against him. It became annoying after a while, huh? Somehow, this does not make me regret it at all. My apologies. Haha.

Thank you very much for the review![/hider]