[@Rune_Alchemist]: I see no problems with the character per se, but I have to clarify:
They just gave her the clothes to look good for the trip, right?

[@VitaVitaAR]: Looks fine, but remember: for advanced magic, you're gonna need mana catalysts of the corresponding affinity and with enough power stored to fire whatever it is off. Since I assume you'll be using a mix of both innate and catalyst-based magic...
Right. Question. How strong is her innate magic?
Oh, and secondary note: Pure mana crystals will act as one half of the recharge mechanism on elemental mana crystals, but can also amplify effects based on size and purity. I'll get to that at a later time.

[@Rin]: Well, so long as it is done, it is done.

[@Zapdos]: Good luck to you there.

Oh, right. I almost forgot.
Two characters max. Aiming for at least a few paragraphs per post if possible, just so nobody gets stuck with any puny amount of text and has to fill in the fluff on their own. The more you give, the more you get. Equivalent exchange, guys.

I have two of my own characters in the works right now, so yeah.
Anyways... Right, interest. I think that we have a decent amount so far, but I'll put off the OoC until tomorrow.