[@skeletor678] I'd lose the puppeteer thing. Anything that can take control of another player character without their consent, I would generally try to avoid. I've seen situations like that get out of control.

He wouldn't be trained in his powers as, at this point, they're practically brand new so I don't think he would be able to lift anywhere near three tons.

He wouldn't be protective of or even know any other Unwanted as no one knows they exist. Only the ones in our current groups know about each other because they've witnessed the powers. The general public is unaware of their existence. There wouldn't be lynchings or rapes. The player characters are the only ones we're aware of with powers. Remember, the event that they think started it all only happened about two weeks ago.

Also, I'd lose the accent. It's weird for someone living in Kentucky to have a British accent (even though there's no such thing as a "British" accent. Don't get me started on that.) without actually being from Britain. And you made no mention of that that I can see.