[@NubianLegend] As Poly said, I'd like to see a few extra vulnerabilities due to your character's powerset. I know you're not finished but I would like to see a bit more about what motivates your character, how he ticks.

[@CadenGallic] Both sheets look good, but I think the Tortoise would be an interesting addition to the roleplay. Either choice is valid however. Whichever you pick, consider that character accepted. 

[@Sterling] The sheet looks good, I'm just a bit confused. Is your character demonic or a fae? She seems to lean heavily towards fae, but the terminology succubus is usually reserved for demons. I'd just like that to be cleared up, otherwise everything looks good.