Alright, I'm still working through both CS's, and I like what I see so far! This isn't my final comments on either, as I haven't really gotten to going over the myths and stuff in detail, however one thing that I noticed in both is that the 'Holdings' section should contain, like, real estate and servants as well as items - so a description of both character's lairs should be in there. As well, I got the sense that Aesir has a not-insignificant body of servants/soldiers/what have you, and if that's the case they should be included in holdings as as well. All in all though, well done, and I'll get more detailed thoughts up in a bit. [quote=@KoL] [@TheWizardLizard] I'm doing a Chaos Angel that's related to [@TheWindel]'s character, she should be ready in no more than a couple hours. [/quote] I look forward to seeing what you guys've got for me! Oh, and since we're getting more interest than I was really expecting, I should say that I've upped the maximum number of people I'm willing to take to eight - because plus my character (who I will start working on soon as well - without spoiling anything, [i]necromancer pirate[/i]) that makes nine, which is like a cool, symbolic evil number. Or something. I don't know, I'm playing this by ear here.