[@Evil Snowman]
[quote]Having under gone the test to see if she [s]what her sync rate was with an[/s] NC [color=f7941d]compatible[/color] at the age of 6 with her Uncle, who knew about her dream to become a pilot and had done what he could to encourage it. Wanting to make sure the child he had practically raised to do the job had always dreamed of doing. Valeriya's uncle helped her get the necessary funds to undergo the the surgery, although never shared how. He helped Valeriya get in contact with Volkov to see about getting some sort of employment. The company seeming interested when her test records showed a [s]fairly high compatibly[/s] [color=f7941d]positive result[/color].   [/quote]

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It took me a while to work out what it was that both made me interested in the character but also unsure about the cs as a whole. I think it comes down to the age.

Your character is 33, but seems to be portrayed as a younger, attractive female. At 33 she would have over 10 years of practice and training as well as being someone who has been in several battles and confrontations. 10 plus years of being wired into an NC and killing people can cause all types of mental problems like PTSD.

There's also the question of why she would wait 10 years to leave Volkov and yet Volkov would give up after a few months. This seems a bit balanced in the opposite of what it should be seeing as they are a large corporation that controls a large army.

I think the character needs to be in their mid 20s and that the age is set a bit high. The character is interesting and with aspects like wearing coloured contacts and mismatched clothes she seems fun, but it doesn't fit the overall theme of her if she's older and especially if she's supposed to be a soldier.