[@SilverDawn] awwh she's super adorable :D! And I love her Family House. A very creative take on the Heart 10 rank and I really like it :D You've done a great job balancing her loadout - i'm happy with all of it!! The only thing I will say is the Beacon of Hope(and Despair) ability sounds more built for combat then as a skill persay. If you'd like to keep it, I'd say that the effect tends to break during combat (as people are focusing on the fight) but it can still be applied passively during the day (protecting from environmental damage or fear damage caused by being in the radius of something corrupted/horrifying if it isn't a direct attack). This also means your character can boost the willpower of characters who are witnessing another character fight something that would usually cause the bystanders mental damage to behold. Then in terms of undermining willpower, it'd be the same thing. And just so I understand how the ability works - is that 50% over her sanity or 50% over theirs? Feel free to give me a quick example, if you like :D Anyway! Apart from that one little thing your character sheet is perfect, and once I understand it properly you can add the character sheet up to the rooster. She's lovely and you've balanced her so well, good job <3 [center][img]http://24.media.tumblr.com/f7a221e991797169c6458a1c85ee2c9e/tumblr_mnqefoilDm1s4q4eyo1_500.gif[/img][/center] EDIT: thanks for the note on the general store! I was messing around with prices so i'll go fix it now... probably for the more extortionate price. mwhahahahahahahahahaha!